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Philosophers think
We may dream our reality.

With earphones attached liked IVs
I dream my own melodic universe.
Until someone laughs behind me
And strikes up conversation with a friend.
And in that moment they become my anchor
Are they spinning through my dream
Or am I spinning through theirs?

Sometimes life fits in a coffee cup,
Sometimes inspiration pours out slowly like a packet of honey,
And sometimes it all mixes together
Like liquid incandescence that I drink right after brewing.

When no one speaks to me for hours
I begin to wonder
Is everyone dreaming a reality that includes
The whole café but me?

The street outside the window
With passing strangers, dogs and cars
Is a whole new Milky Way
Waiting to be discovered.
But I am no space explorer
Aliens are beyond my reach.
Whispers of the people around
Reach my ears distinctly
Like waves lapping on the shore.

Words on paper go no way
Towards proving that I was ever here
My identity is slowly condensed
Not into the people who know me
But into nothing more significant than a spiral-ringed, Walmart notebook.

Strangers flutter around
Like pages in the wind.
My actions spread across my world
Like ink across lines.
I check a pulse
And it flutters weakly
Like a small camera shutter
Snapping open and closed beneath the skin of my wrist.
But I only show up as white mist
Glitches upon the film.

Coffee shop memoirs
Are the legacies
I shall write out
Fold up
And snail mail
Out to other people’s dreams
Desperately reminding them
That I am still out there

A small planet, a pompous rose and one little prince.
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Author's Comments

One day I should gather all the poems I've written this year (and possibly next) and call them Coffee Shop Memoirs since that's where I spend most of my life right now.

If that was done this would be retitled Depersonalization. Sometimes I feel like my life is just this someone else's dream and I am a glitch for being in it.

Last line references The Little Prince.

04.05.09

OMG! A Daily Deviation. I'm still in shock and I've known for almost five hours now. Thank you :iconfallenidle: for suggesting me. :glomp:

04.13.09


Lit tag curtsey of :iconjokerswild180: and his amazing abstract photography.

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-04-13

Coffee Shop Memoirs by ~AnUrbanNomad speaks to us on several different levels. It also makes us ponder about our own memories, as it brings alive along with it the perfect amount of imagery. (Suggested by =fallenidle and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:iconfallenidle:
This is SO wonderful! What a perfectly worded, magical escape. It is something very relatable to me. I love this!

--
If she has to tell the story,
She tells it slowly

- ~AnUrbanNomad, "And They Didn't Sleep..."
:iconanurbannomad:
Thank you so much. It always means a lot to me when you like my poems. :hug: I'm beginning to think that this depersonalization/dreaming state is fairly common among artists.
:iconfallenidle:
I highly agree after reading your work. This is one of those amazing pieces that reminds us artists that we are not as alone as we feel sometimes. It's brilliant! :heart:

--
If she has to tell the story,
She tells it slowly

- ~AnUrbanNomad, "And They Didn't Sleep..."
:iconanurbannomad:
I'm so glad you think so. :D I really does make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
:iconshadowmax76:
like watching cappuccino swirl around in slo-mo. x3 i like.

--
Evasive boredom gets the best of us procastinating fuckers.
There shouldn't be a reason in order to interact with someone, other than that you can.
Do not fear affecting someone's life, the only person to blame is the one who can't handle love.
:iconsardoza:
*blink blink* So wonderful...and true for many of us who spend our days and talents writing, as well as for quite a few of those in all other walks of life.

please, expect a longer comment from me later. I'd leave one now, but I'm heading off to bed.

--
[link] <------- click for pumpkin pie
you may call me Darth Baal >3

"Make her fly Reap. Make her fly." ~Sean [*LordKnightXiron]
:iconsunlitequinox:
Just so lovely. Wow. I don't know if it's just growing up in this generation or what, but I really relate to this.

--
What can I say? Just another crazy free-spirit in the world.
:iconbatracien333:
coffee cup :) I like the image :)

--
War & Tyrany are for Loosers...
:spotlight-left: :jedi: :spotlight-right:
:iconcheshire-shadow:
Dad was right!Writers DO come up with stuff in coffee shops a lot!
:iconduskydawn:
I know EXACTLY how you feel. Uberfaved.

--
"With our love, with our love,
We could save save the world,
If we only knew!"


- The Beatles, Within You Without You

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